I seem to recall he used a big sword to open up people who had had anything to do with it. That works too, I think.

Agree with TG. I did, however, finish reading the article but the section regarding the fiancée had the going "whaaaaat?". Please clean this up as it's otherwise an interesting read.

So, I guess you guys have no editors. I get the gist of the article, but damn, I couldn't finish it, because it's plagued with errors in grammar and sentence form.

Great article conceptually, but please EDIT!